2011 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates
Section II Writing (Part A)
Section II Writing
Part A
46. Directions:
Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to congratulate him/her, and give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead. Do not write your address. (10 points)
Sample Essay
Dear Li Ming,
I am writing to express my heartiest congratulations on your admission to the university. It is a well-deserved reward for your years of hard work.
To help you get prepared for university life, I would like to offer some suggestions. First, focus on improving your academic skills, especially English CET-4, as it is crucial for your future development. Second, try to develop your independence and join various student clubs to broaden your horizons in fields like ecology. Remember, a balance between study and social activities is the key to success.
I wish you a fruitful and happy university life.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
Essential Sentence Patterns
【开篇：表达诚挚的祝贺】
I am writing to express my heartiest congratulations on your admission to the university.
【肯定：称赞对方的努力】
It is a well-deserved reward for your years of hard work.
【建议：强调学术与英语学习】
First, you should focus on your academic skills, especially English, which is crucial for your future.
【建议：提到社交与全面发展】
Second, joining various student clubs will help broaden your horizons and develop independence.
【结尾：表达祝愿与落款】
I wish you a fruitful university life. / Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei