2011 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English II)
Section II Writing (Part B)
Part B
48. Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
【附图内容描述】2008、2009 年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额示意图
1. 国产品牌 (Domestic brands)：份额从 2008 年的 25% 激增至 2009 年的 34%；
2. 日系品牌 (Japanese brands)：份额从 2008 年的 35% 剧烈下降至 2009 年的 25%；
3. 美系品牌 (American brands)：份额保持相对稳定，从 15% 略微下降至 14%。
数据反映出国产品牌在这一时期实现了爆发式增长，成功反超日系品牌。
Sample Essay
As is vividly illustrated in the chart, there were significant changes in the market share of several car brands in China between 2008 and 2009. Specifically, the market share of domestic brands surged from 25% to 34% during this period. In sharp contrast, Japanese brands experienced a decline from 35% to 25%. Meanwhile, American brands remained relatively stable, with only a slight decrease from 15% to 14%.
The intended meaning of this chart is profound: it highlights the rising competitive advantage and the rapid growth of domestic car manufacturers. Several factors contribute to this encouraging trend. First and foremost, domestic brands have made great improvements in quality and technological innovation. Second, government policies such as purchase incentives for domestic cars have played a crucial role. Moreover, with the impact of the global economic crisis, consumers have shifted their preference toward cost-effective options provided by local brands.
In my opinion, the rise of domestic brands demonstrates the vitality of China's auto industry. Nevertheless, long-term success lies in continuous technological breakthroughs and brand building. It is essential for domestic companies to maintain this momentum by focusing on excellence in both products and services. Only by doing so can they secure a more promising future in the global market.
Essential Sentence Patterns
【图表描述：描述数据的激增与下降对比】
The market share of domestic brands surged from 25% to 34%, while Japanese brands experienced a decline.
【图表描述：描述相对稳定的小幅变动】
American brands remained relatively stable, with only a slight decrease.
【意义阐释：点明竞争优势与快速增长】
It highlights the rising competitive advantage and the rapid growth of domestic car manufacturers.
【意义阐释：分析政策与性价比因素】
Government policies and shifted consumer preference toward cost-effective options have driven this trend.
【总结升华：强调核心技术突破的重要性】
Long-term success lies in continuous technological breakthroughs and brand building.