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2011 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English I)

Section II Writing (Part A)

SectionIIWriting
PartA
46.Directions:
Writealettertoafriendofyourstorecommendoneofyourfavoritemoviesandgivereasonsforyourrecommendation.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)

Sample Essay

DearFriend,
Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.IamwritingtorecommendanextraordinarymovieIwatchedrecently,whichis"Avatar".Itisabsolutelyastunningvisualmasterpiecethatyoushouldnotmiss.
Theprimaryreasonformyrecommendationisitsprofoundportrayalofacomplexecosystem.Asastudentofecology,IfindthebiologicalconnectionsbetweenplantsonPandoratrulyfascinating—itevenremindsmeofthenetworkofmycorrhizalfungiinourownforests.Moreover,themovieencouragesustoreflectontheharmonybetweenhumanityandnature.Iamconvincedthatyouwillfindthisexperiencebothinspiringandenjoyable.
Lookingforwardtohearingyourthoughtsafterwatchingit!
Yourssincerely,
LiMing

Essential Sentence Patterns

【开篇:礼貌问候并引出电影推荐】
I am writing to recommend an extraordinary movie I watched recently, which is...
【理由:强调电影的视觉冲击力】
It is absolutely a stunning visual masterpiece that you should not miss.
【理由:结合专业视角描述深度内容】
The primary reason is its profound portrayal of a complex ecosystem and biological connections.
【升华:提到电影蕴含的哲学意义】
Moreover, the movie encourages us to reflect on the harmony between humanity and nature.
【结尾:表达期待与落款】
Looking forward to hearing your thoughts! / Yours sincerely, Li Ming

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