汉译英 (Translation) - 环境保护
▍ 原题展示
中国政府十分重视环境保护。近年来,中国在减少空气、水和土壤污染上取得了显著成效。为了不断改善人们的生活环境,中国采取了一系列有效措施,包括大力发展清洁能源,改善公共交通,推广共享单车,实施垃圾分类。通过这些措施,中国的城市和农村正在绿起来、美起来。中国还积极参与国际合作,为全球环境保护做出了重要贡献。
▍ 逐句翻译训练 (点击中文句子查看英文)
1. 中国政府十分重视环境保护。
The Chinese government attaches great importance to environmental protection.
2. 近年来,中国在减少空气、水和土壤污染上取得了显著成效。
In recent years, China has achieved remarkable results in reducing air, water and soil pollution.
3. 为了不断改善人们的生活环境,中国采取了一系列有效措施,
To continuously improve people's living environment, China has taken a series of effective measures,
4. 包括大力发展清洁能源,改善公共交通,推广共享单车,实施垃圾分类。
including developing clean energy, improving public transportation, promoting shared bikes, and implementing garbage classification.
5. 通过这些措施,中国的城市和农村正在绿起来、美起来。
Through these measures, cities and rural areas in China are becoming greener and more beautiful.
6. 中国还积极参与国际合作,为全球环境保护做出了重要贡献。
China has also actively participated in international cooperation, making important contributions to global environmental protection.
▍ 核心句型解析
1. 动名词并列 (Parallel Gerunds)
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解析：原文“包括……”后面接了四个并列的动作。在英文中，介词/分词短语 `including` 后面应当接动名词作宾语，因此四个动词全部使用 `-ing` 形式，构成完美的平行排比结构，这是四六级翻译的经典拿分点。
句型：
..., including developing..., improving..., promoting..., and implementing...解析：原文“包括……”后面接了四个并列的动作。在英文中，介词/分词短语 `including` 后面应当接动名词作宾语，因此四个动词全部使用 `-ing` 形式，构成完美的平行排比结构，这是四六级翻译的经典拿分点。
2. 现在进行时态 (Present Continuous Tense)
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解析：原文“正在绿起来、美起来”。强调动作正在发生且呈现出一种变化趋势。使用现在进行时 `are becoming` 加上形容词比较级 `greener and more beautiful`，生动传神地表达了“变得越来越好”的过程。
句型：
...are becoming greener and more beautiful.解析：原文“正在绿起来、美起来”。强调动作正在发生且呈现出一种变化趋势。使用现在进行时 `are becoming` 加上形容词比较级 `greener and more beautiful`，生动传神地表达了“变得越来越好”的过程。
3. 现在分词作结果状语 (Present Participle as Result Adverbial)
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解析：原文“中国还积极参与国际合作，为……做出了重要贡献”。“做出贡献”是“参与合作”带来的直接结果。摒弃繁琐的 `and has made...`，使用现在分词短语 `making...` 作结果状语，句式显得更为紧凑且具备高级感。
句型：
..., making important contributions to...解析：原文“中国还积极参与国际合作，为……做出了重要贡献”。“做出贡献”是“参与合作”带来的直接结果。摒弃繁琐的 `and has made...`，使用现在分词短语 `making...` 作结果状语，句式显得更为紧凑且具备高级感。
4. 固定高级搭配 (Advanced Collocations)
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解析：翻译绝不仅仅是单词的堆砌。“十分重视”译为 `attach great importance to`，“取得显著成效”译为 `achieve remarkable results/success in`，这都是考官非常看重的地道、书面化的高级搭配。
句型：
attach great importance to... / achieve remarkable results in...解析：翻译绝不仅仅是单词的堆砌。“十分重视”译为 `attach great importance to`，“取得显著成效”译为 `achieve remarkable results/success in`，这都是考官非常看重的地道、书面化的高级搭配。
▍ 核心词汇积累
attach great importance to [动词短语] 十分重视
achieve remarkable results [动宾搭配] 取得显著成效
living environment [名词短语] 生活环境
take a series of effective measures [动宾搭配] 采取一系列有效措施
clean energy [名词短语] 清洁能源
public transportation [名词短语] 公共交通
shared bikes / shared bicycles [名词短语] 共享单车
garbage classification / waste sorting [名词短语] 垃圾分类
rural areas [名词短语] 农村地区
international cooperation [名词短语] 国际合作
make important contributions to [动宾搭配] 为...做出重要贡献
▍ 完整参考译文
The Chinese government attaches great importance to environmental protection. In recent years, China has achieved remarkable results in reducing air, water and soil pollution. To continuously improve people's living environment, China has taken a series of effective measures, including developing clean energy, improving public transportation, promoting shared bikes, and implementing garbage classification. Through these measures, cities and rural areas in China are becoming greener and more beautiful. China has also actively participated in international cooperation, making important contributions to global environmental protection.