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2021 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English I)

Section II Writing (Part A)

SectionIIWriting
PartA
46.Directions:
AforeignfriendofyourshasrecentlygraduatedfromcollegeandintendstofindajobinChina.Writehim/herane-mailtomakesomesuggestions.
Youshouldwriteabout100wordsontheANSWERSHEET.Donotuseyourownnameintheemail;use"LiMing"instead.(10points)

Sample Essay

DearFriend,
IwasthrilledtohearaboutyourgraduationandyourplantoseekemploymentinChina.Asyouprepareforthisexcitingjourney,Iwouldliketoofferafewsuggestions.
First,youmightexplorethebooming"greenenergy"andenvironmentalprotectionsectors,asthesefieldsarecurrentlyhighprioritiesinChina’sdevelopment.Additionally,itisbeneficialtomasterlocalprofessionalsocialmediaandrecruitmentappstobroadenyournetwork.Lastbutnotleast,obtainingabasicChineseproficiencycertificatewouldsignificantlyenhanceyourcompetitiveness.Chinaoffersadiverseprofessionallandscape,andIamconfidentyouwillfindapositionthatsuitsyourtalents.
Ilookforwardtoyourarrival!
Yourssincerely,
LiMing

Essential Sentence Patterns

【开篇:表示祝贺并引出建议目的】
I am thrilled to hear about your plan to seek employment in China and would like to offer some suggestions.
【建议:推荐当下热门或重点行业】
First, you might explore the booming 'green' sectors, which are high priorities in China’s development.
【建议:提议利用社交与招聘工具】
Additionally, it is beneficial to master local professional social media and recruitment apps.
【建议:强调语言能力对竞争力的提升】
Last but not least, obtaining a language certificate would significantly enhance your competitiveness.
【结尾:表达信心与真挚的期待】
I am confident you will find a position that suits your talents and I look forward to your arrival.

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