2021 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English I)
Section II Writing (Part B)
Section II Writing
Part B
47. Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should
1) describe the picture briefly,
2) interpret the implied meaning, and
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
【附图内容描述】
画面的正中是一对父子的对话。孩子低着头,显得有些沮丧,对爸爸说:“爸爸,很多同学觉得学唱戏不好玩。”
爸爸温和地摸着孩子的头,鼓励地回答道:“你自己不是喜欢吗?那就足够了。”
这幅图生动地反映了在面对外界声音和同伴压力时,坚持自我内心热爱的重要性。
Sample Essay
As is vividly depicted in the drawing, a young boy is talking to his father with a frustrated look. He lowers his head and complains, "Dad, many classmates think learning to sing traditional opera is not fun." Patting the boy on the head, the father replies warmly, "Don't you like it yourself? That's enough."
The metaphorical meaning of this picture is profound: it highlights the significance of independent thinking and the courage to pursue one's own passion despite peer pressure. In our society, people inevitably encounter doubts or negative comments from others. Some people may easily give up their dreams and conform to the majority. However, as the father suggests, genuine interest is the best teacher and the strongest motivation. What truly matters is not how others judge our choices, but whether we find inner peace and fulfillment in doing what we love.
In my opinion, we should firmly stick to our own hearts and not be easily swayed by external voices. When facing peer pressure or societal stereotypes, we need to have the courage to persevere in our unique path. Only by being true to ourselves can we achieve self-realization and lead a meaningful life.
Essential Sentence Patterns
【图画描述段:动作与对话描写】
He lowers his head and complains... Patting the boy on the head, the father replies warmly...
【意义阐释段:揭示坚持自我与独立思考】
It highlights the significance of independent thinking and the courage to pursue one's own passion.
【意义阐释段:分析盲从与初心的对立】
What truly matters is not how others judge our choices, but whether we find inner peace.
【个人评论段:提出坚持自我的对策】
We should firmly stick to our own hearts and not be easily swayed by external voices.
【总结升华段:呼吁自我实现】
Only by being true to ourselves can we achieve self-realization and lead a meaningful life.