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2017 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English I)

Section II Writing (Part B)

SectionIIWriting
PartB
47.Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingpictures.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethepicturebriefly,
2)interpretthemeaning,and
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.(20points)

【附图内容描述】

画面的主体是左右两幅对比鲜明的图画,探讨了“有书”与“读书”的关系。

左图中,一个年轻人正豪情万丈地立下目标:“我争取今年读完20本书。”

右图中,同一个人面对着书架上堆满的书籍,却只是满足地感叹道:“我有这么多书!”。

这组图画生动地讽刺了那些只满足于“拥有”知识载体,却不愿付出努力去“阅读”和内化知识的人。

Sample Essay

Asisvividlydepictedinthetwocontrastingpictures,amanholdsdifferentattitudestowardsbooks.Intheleftpicture,hesetsanambitiousgoal,saying,"Iwilltrytofinishreading20booksthisyear."However,intherightpicture,hesimplystandsbeforeshelvesfullofbooks,boasting,"Ihavesomanybooks!"Thecaptiontitled"Owningbooks"vs."Readingbooks"highlightsthesharpdifferencebetweenpossessionandaction.
Themetaphoricalmeaningofthesepicturesisprofound:theyreflectaprevalentphenomenoninmodernsocietywherepeopleoftenmistakepossessionforacquisition.Manypeopleenjoythesatisfactionofbuyingbooksorcollectinginformation,butfewactuallydedicatetimetosubstantialreadingandknowledgeinternalization.Merely"owning"somethingcreatesanillusionofprogress,whiletrueintellectualgrowthrequiresconsistenteffortanddeepthinking.Asthesayinggoes,"Knowledgeispoweronlywhenitisinternalizedandapplied."
Inmyopinion,itisessentialforustorealizethatgenuineknowledgeaccumulationcomesfromactionratherthanslogans.Toachieveourgoals,weneedself-disciplineandpatiencetotransformthebooksonourshelvesintowisdominourminds.Onlybyfocusingonthedepthofourreading,ratherthanjustthequantityofourpossessions,canwetrulybenefitfromtheoceanofknowledge.

Essential Sentence Patterns

【图画描述段:描述两幅图的强对比】
The caption titled 'Owning books' vs. 'Reading books' highlights the sharp difference between possession and action.
【意义阐释段:揭示社会普遍现象】
They reflect a prevalent phenomenon where people often mistake possession for acquisition.
【意义阐释段:分析表象与实质的区别】
Merely 'owning' something creates an illusion of progress, while true growth requires consistent effort.
【个人评论段:倡导行动胜过口号】
Genuine knowledge accumulation comes from action rather than slogans.
【总结升华段:强调转化的重要性】
We need patience to transform the books on our shelves into wisdom in our minds.

Practice makes perfect.