2010 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English II)
Section II Writing (Part B)
Part B
48. Directions:
In this part, you are asked to write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
【附图内容描述】
图表展示了 2000 年至 2008 年全球手机用户数量的变化情况(单位:十亿)。
1. 发展中国家:用户数量从 2000 年的不足 10 亿持续快速增长,到 2008 年已接近 40 亿。
2. 发达国家:用户数量增长相对缓慢,到 2008 年时约为 10 亿。
这种明显的差距反映了移动通信技术在发展中国家爆发式的普及。
Sample Essay
As is vividly illustrated in the chart, there was a dramatic increase in the number of mobile phone subscribers worldwide from 2000 to 2008. Specifically, the number of users in developing countries surged from less than 1 billion in 2000 to nearly 4 billion in 2008. In sharp contrast, developed countries only experienced a slight climb, reaching approximately 1 billion users by the end of 2008.
The intended meaning of this chart is profound: it highlights the rapid expansion of information technology in the developing world. Several factors contribute to this tremendous growth. First and foremost, the large population base in developing countries creates a huge market demand. Secondly, with economic globalization and the advancement of technology, mobile phones have become more affordable, making them an essential tool for daily communication. Furthermore, the limited landline infrastructure in these regions has driven people to embrace mobile technology directly.
In my opinion, this positive trend will undoubtedly continue to benefit global development. The popularity of mobile phones narrows the digital divide and enhances work efficiency and the quality of life for billions of people. Moreover, it reflects the enormous potential of emerging markets. As long as we continue to promote technological innovation and international cooperation, we can expect a more connected and prosperous world.
Essential Sentence Patterns
【图表描述段:描述数据的显著增长】
The number of users in developing countries surged from less than 1 billion to nearly 4 billion.
【图表描述段:描述两组数据的对比】
In sharp contrast, developed countries only experienced a slight climb.
【意义阐释段:点明信息技术扩张主题】
It highlights the rapid expansion of information technology in the developing world.
【意义阐释段:分析市场需求的原因】
The large population base in developing countries creates a huge market demand.
【总结升华段:强调缩小数字鸿沟的意义】
The popularity of mobile phones narrows the digital divide and enhances the quality of life.