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2010 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English II)

Section II Writing (Part B)

PartB
48.Directions:
Inthispart,youareaskedtowriteanessaybasedonthefollowingchart.Inyourwriting,youshould
1)interpretthechart,and
2)giveyourcomments.
Youshouldwriteatleast150words.WriteyouressayonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)

【附图内容描述】

图表展示了 2000 年至 2008 年全球手机用户数量的变化情况(单位:十亿)。

1. 发展中国家:用户数量从 2000 年的不足 10 亿持续快速增长,到 2008 年已接近 40 亿。

2. 发达国家:用户数量增长相对缓慢,到 2008 年时约为 10 亿。

这种明显的差距反映了移动通信技术在发展中国家爆发式的普及。

Sample Essay

Asisvividlyillustratedinthechart,therewasadramaticincreaseinthenumberofmobilephonesubscribersworldwidefrom2000to2008.Specifically,thenumberofusersindevelopingcountriessurgedfromlessthan1billionin2000tonearly4billionin2008.Insharpcontrast,developedcountriesonlyexperiencedaslightclimb,reachingapproximately1billionusersbytheendof2008.
Theintendedmeaningofthischartisprofound:ithighlightstherapidexpansionofinformationtechnologyinthedevelopingworld.Severalfactorscontributetothistremendousgrowth.Firstandforemost,thelargepopulationbaseindevelopingcountriescreatesahugemarketdemand.Secondly,witheconomicglobalizationandtheadvancementoftechnology,mobilephoneshavebecomemoreaffordable,makingthemanessentialtoolfordailycommunication.Furthermore,thelimitedlandlineinfrastructureintheseregionshasdrivenpeopletoembracemobiletechnologydirectly.
Inmyopinion,thispositivetrendwillundoubtedlycontinuetobenefitglobaldevelopment.Thepopularityofmobilephonesnarrowsthedigitaldivideandenhancesworkefficiencyandthequalityoflifeforbillionsofpeople.Moreover,itreflectstheenormouspotentialofemergingmarkets.Aslongaswecontinuetopromotetechnologicalinnovationandinternationalcooperation,wecanexpectamoreconnectedandprosperousworld.

Essential Sentence Patterns

【图表描述段:描述数据的显著增长】
The number of users in developing countries surged from less than 1 billion to nearly 4 billion.
【图表描述段:描述两组数据的对比】
In sharp contrast, developed countries only experienced a slight climb.
【意义阐释段:点明信息技术扩张主题】
It highlights the rapid expansion of information technology in the developing world.
【意义阐释段:分析市场需求的原因】
The large population base in developing countries creates a huge market demand.
【总结升华段:强调缩小数字鸿沟的意义】
The popularity of mobile phones narrows the digital divide and enhances the quality of life.

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