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2012 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English I)

Section II Writing (Part B)

SectionIIWriting
PartB
47.Directions:
Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould
1)describethedrawingbriefly,
2)interpretitsintendedmeaning,and
3)giveyourcomments.
YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.(20points)

【附图内容描述】

画面的正中,地上倒着一个洒出大半液体的瓶子。面对同样的场景,两个人的反应截然不同。

左边的人捂着脸,显得非常沮丧,叹气说道:“全完了”。而右边的人则面带微笑,连忙伸手去扶起瓶子,并庆幸地说:“幸好还剩点儿”。

这幅漫画生动地展示了面对同一挫折时,悲观者与乐观者的不同心态。

Sample Essay

Asisvividlydepictedinthedrawing,abottleisoverturnedontheground,withmostofitsliquidspilledout.Twomenreactentirelydifferentlytothissituation.Themanontheleftcovershisfaceindespair,sighing,"Itisallruined."Conversely,themanontherighthurriedlyreachesouttoliftthebottle,smilingandsaying,"Fortunately,thereisstillsomeleft."
Themetaphoricalmeaningofthispictureisprofound:ithighlightsthestrikingcontrastbetweenoptimismandpessimismwhenpeoplefaceadversityorsetbacks.Inourjourneyoflife,itisinevitablethatwewillencountervariousdifficulties,justlikethespilledbottle.Pessimiststendtofocusonwhattheyhavelost,feelingdepressedandeasilygivingup.Optimists,however,alwayslookonthebrightside,focusingonwhattheystillhaveandtryingtheirbesttoremedythesituation.
Inmyopinion,weshoulddefinitelyadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife.Whenfacedwithchallenges,weshouldnotcryoverspilledmilk.Instead,weneedtomaintainanoptimisticmindset,whichgivesusthecouragetoovercomeobstaclesandturnfailuresintosteppingstonesforsuccess.Asafamoussayinggoes,"Apessimistseesthedifficultyineveryopportunity;anoptimistseestheopportunityineverydifficulty."

Essential Sentence Patterns

【图画描述段:描述人物截然不同的反应】
Two men react entirely differently to this situation.
【意义阐释段:揭示对比寓意】
It highlights the striking contrast between optimism and pessimism when people face adversity.
【意义阐释段:分析两类人的行为特征】
Pessimists focus on what they have lost, while optimists always look on the bright side.
【个人评论段:化用经典谚语】
When faced with challenges, we should not cry over spilled milk.
【总结升华段:引用名言收尾】
A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty.

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