2023 National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (English II)
Section II Writing (Part B)
Part B
48. Directions:
Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) describe and interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
【附图内容描述】2012-2021 年我国居民健康素养水平折线图
1. 2012-2015 年:水平从 8.80% 缓慢上升至 10.25%;
2. 2016-2021 年:增长速度显著加快,从 11.58% 持续攀升;
3. 2021 年:达到 25.40% 的峰值。
数据反映了过去十年间,我国居民在获取、理解和运用健康信息能力方面的长足进步。
Sample Essay
As is vividly illustrated in the line chart, there has been a steady and continuous growth in the health literacy level of Chinese residents from 2012 to 2021. Specifically, the figure stood at 8.80% in 2012 and rose slowly in the first few years. Notably, the level surged more rapidly after 2016, eventually reaching a peak of 25.40% in 2021.
The intended meaning of this trend is profound: it reflects the great importance our society attaches to health and the successful implementation of national strategies. First, the "Healthy China" initiative has promoted health knowledge across the country. Second, the impact of the pandemic has significantly raised public health awareness, prompting people to be more proactive in acquiring and understanding health information to protect themselves.
In my opinion, this is a highly positive phenomenon that enhances individual well-being and reduces the burden on the healthcare system. Only by continuously improving health literacy can we build a healthier and more prosperous society. It is essential for the government to continue providing accessible health services for all residents.
Essential Sentence Patterns
【图表描述:描述数据的稳步增长】
There has been a steady and continuous growth in the health literacy level from 2012 to 2021.
【图表描述:描述后期增速加快】
Notably, the level surged more rapidly after 2016, eventually reaching a peak of 25.40%.
【意义阐释:点明社会重视与战略实施】
It reflects the great importance our society attaches to health and the implementation of national strategies.
【意义阐释:分析疫情对意识提升的影响】
The impact of the pandemic has significantly raised public health awareness.
【个人评论:点明健康素养对社会的意义】
Continuously improving health literacy is essential for building a healthier and more prosperous society.