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Part C: Translation (2017 英二)

Part 1: Full Text (Click to Translate)

My dream has always been to work somewhere in an area between fashion and publishing. Two years before graduating from secondary school, I took a sewing and design course thinking that I would move on to a fashion design course.
However, during that course I realized I was not good enough in this area to compete with other creative personalities in the future, so I decided that it was not the right path for me.
Before applying for university I told everyone that I would study journalism, because writing was, and still is, one of my favourite activities. But, to be honest, I said it, because I thought that fashion and me together was just a dream - I knew that no one could imagine me in the fashion industry at all!
So I decided to look for some fashion-related courses that included writing. This is when I noticed the course "Fashion Media & Promotion."

Part 2: Sentence Translation (Click to Expand)

01My dream has always been to work somewhere in an area between fashion and publishing.
02Two years before graduating from secondary school, I took a sewing and design course thinking that I would move on to a fashion design course.
03However, during that course I realized I was not good enough in this area to compete with other creative personalities in the future, so I decided that it was not the right path for me.
04Before applying for university I told everyone that I would study journalism, because writing was, and still is, one of my favourite activities.
05But, to be honest, I said it, because I thought that fashion and me together was just a dream - I knew that no one could imagine me in the fashion industry at all!
06So I decided to look for some fashion-related courses that included writing.
07This is when I noticed the course "Fashion Media & Promotion."

Part 3: Syntax Analysis (重点句型剖析)

02 句型拆解:现在分词作伴随状语
句首 Two years before graduating from secondary school 是时间状语,其中 graduating 是动名词作介词 before 的宾语。主干为 I took a sewing and design course。后面的 thinking that I would move on to... 是现在分词短语作伴随状语(表心理状态),其中 that 引导了宾语从句作 thinking 的宾语。

03 句型拆解:并列句与省略引导词的宾语从句
这是一个由 so 连接的并列句。前半句中,I realized 后面省略了引导词 that,直接跟了宾语从句 I was not good enough... to compete with...,其中不定式 to compete 用来补充说明 enough(不够优秀到可以去竞争)。后半句为 so I decided that...that 引导宾语从句说明决定的内容。

04 句型拆解:双重谓语插入与原因状语从句
句首 Before applying for university 是时间状语。主句为 I told everyone that I would study journalismthat 引导宾语从句。逗号之后由 because 引导原因状语从句,值得注意的是,从句中插入了 , and still is, 形成复合谓语结构(过去是,并且现在依然是),这让句子在时间维度上更加严谨。

05 句型拆解:独立成分与破折号的解释说明
to be honest 是不定式短语作独立成分(老实说)。主干 I said it 之后,because 引导了原因状语从句 because I thought that...。在破折号之后,I knew that no one could imagine me... 进一步解释了前面“为什么说只是个梦想”的深层原因,at all 用于否定句末加强语气(根本不)。

07 句型拆解:表语从句
主干为 This is when I noticed the course...。这里 when 引导的是一个表语从句,作系动词 is 的表语。This 指代上一句中“我决定寻找相关课程”的这个时候。

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